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Author Topic: MHI Fan Fiction: Retaliation  (Read 2738 times)
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« Reply #75 on: December 19, 2009, 12:55:07 AM »
Quote from: Harm on December 18, 2009, 09:44:00 PM
Cameron - Question.  From Chapter 5WTH?!  
How does a vamp destroy a shotgun with it's eyes?

Try this:

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its eyes destroyed by the shotgun

In the previous paragraph Ryan blew the vamp's face off with a shotgun, so I assume this is what was meant.
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« Reply #76 on: December 19, 2009, 08:27:01 AM »
Quote from: Harm on December 18, 2009, 09:44:00 PM
Cameron - Question.  From Chapter 5WTH?! 
How does a vamp destroy a shotgun with it's eyes?

He could have laser eyes.  Scrutiny


Interesting and possibly plot-changing typo there. Grin It should be what Molson said, "eyes destroyed BY the shotgun."

Quote from: Harm on December 18, 2009, 09:44:00 PM
ETA: Oh and great story man.  Really enjoyed it.  Normally not a fan of fanfic due to the difficulties most authors have merging into the original universe.  Good job.

Glad you like it!
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